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Post by starrywarrior on Sept 24, 2010 5:29:08 GMT -6
Of course, Andrew hadn't planned to go in depth with him or any of the others at that point, but it could easily be the result of him trying to be tough.
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Post by apocalypseArisen on Sept 24, 2010 8:45:05 GMT -6
I'm open to critique. :y
You guys are all doing pretty good though, in my opinion...
Oh- Nepeta, however, doesn't always have to talk in asterisks.
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Post by radicalapologist on Sept 24, 2010 9:37:44 GMT -6
Funny enough I'd been wondering about that as well everybody, I went back to some logs Tav had with Dave/Rose/Jade and surprise enough, he's got way more of a spine than he did back in Alternia, I'll do what I can but check the logs, I kind of got scared at the insults he was throwing around even if just to make Karkat happy. (He also apparently talks in a way more complicated way than I ever gave him credit, gotta work my vocab) hm..well i guess the best thing to do as of right now is wait for tavros to talk to them again we'll see if he really DID get a stronger character or if it was just hussie unsure of what to do with him yet |
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Post by radicalapologist on Sept 24, 2010 9:39:16 GMT -6
I'm open to critique. :y You guys are all doing pretty good though, in my opinion... Oh- Nepeta, however, doesn't always have to talk in asterisks. as for you i believe you are doing just fine there isnt much to fix |
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Post by adiosToreador on Sept 24, 2010 10:33:06 GMT -6
Yeah, I'll retcon stuff as it happens Radical, do not fret and I thank you all for the constructive criticism. }:y
Also I think it's safe to say all of you do a splendid job on your respective characters, funny enough each Nepeta has the inverse of the other as a problem, one only roleplays and the other only talks, you two should exchange some ideas, maybe read over chat logs, not that you have many to study anyways, but even with that you two do a great job.
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Post by gamzee on Sept 24, 2010 11:51:29 GMT -6
I'm gonna up and need some criticism all up in this bitch.
Everyone to me seems to be doing a wonderful job, except for a few of the problems already pointed out.
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Post by carcinogeneticist on Sept 24, 2010 12:33:03 GMT -6
Give me critique, I demand it!
And I really don't have much to say to everyone else. You're all wonderful.
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golgothasTerror
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Post by golgothasTerror on Sept 24, 2010 12:50:06 GMT -6
Gamzee, the only problem I have with you is that you mention miracles too much.
If you look back at his logs, you will see that they are only occasionally used, and not a constant flow. Most logs he doesn't even mention them at all.
Everyone else is pretty much perfect though.
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Post by gamzee on Sept 24, 2010 13:07:41 GMT -6
Gamzee, the only problem I have with you is that you mention miracles too much. If you look back at his logs, you will see that they are only occasionally used, and not a constant flow. Most logs he doesn't even mention them at all. Everyone else is pretty much perfect though. |
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Post by arachnidsGrip on Sept 24, 2010 13:10:33 GMT -6
Yeah, Aradia has practically no personality, but THAT'S her character, really.
I agree with Shadow on Gamzee, but, you know, Gamzee is practically a joke in himself. |
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Post by starrywarrior on Sept 24, 2010 13:14:40 GMT -6
It's not really hard to be Karkat though
ANGRY INSULTS ALL THE TIME, YOU FUCKING SEEDFLAP STAINING JACKASS OF A BONEBULGE
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hellajeef
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WHat do i upt here/
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Post by hellajeef on Sept 24, 2010 13:26:08 GMT -6
Give me critique, I demand it! You're great, obviously, but, uh...I can't remember which, but one of the Karkats yelled at Eridan at least once. Karkat and Eridan are supposed to be buddies. That's all the criticism for anyone I can think of at the moment. You're all brilliant. |
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Post by arseniccatnip on Sept 24, 2010 13:52:07 GMT -6
I have a question, I was told that I should avoid roleplaying sentences like "ac thinks" and that i shouldnt be afraid to just say hi or bye or i thikn we should bla bla bla without roleplaying, do you agree? the amount i roleplay as nepeta is THE most important part of my character.
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Post by hellajeef on Sept 24, 2010 14:31:56 GMT -6
OH
Now I finally see what you mean.
ROLEPLAY ROLEPLAY
Yeah, AC doesn't always roleplay, only at the beginning of her conversations and sometimes sporadically in the middle. Beyond that, use your judgment, I guess.
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Post by radicalapologist on Sept 24, 2010 14:59:16 GMT -6
ah yes
something for fef
FISH WAND WATER PUNS
YOU NEED THEM
ALOT OF THEM
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